Hi, I just wanted to say, you're beautiful. i just wanted you to know that when I see you I get excited, no matter what.
Hi, have you heard? No, the bird is not the word. I'm just interested in you, I like you.I find you to be the most amazing thing I've ever known.
Hey, you dropped this and don't worry I'll be there to pick you up when you're down too. At least If you let me.
Hey, how you doin'? That's great. Me? I'm tired. Why? Because I've been chasing you around in my head all night. Yeah it's weird, but I hold the most important things close to my heart. Ironically, that list only contains you.
Hola, to be honest, I only know ten other Spanish words then that one. Yes, just a few. Why? Because, why should I learn another language, when I can get to know you in this one?
That was really good!
ReplyDeleteMy cool comment: is that I think you should go into more detail about who or what you are talking about because you left some question.
Warm comment: is that it made me want to keep reading so I could figure out what the topic was.
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I like how you keep the story going. You make it flow by repeating. One thing, like what Kelsey said is I wish that you went more into detail about the topic.
ReplyDeleteThanks ya'll.
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